Tiêu đề WRITING TASK 1-LINE GRAPH-Electricity Production in Germany by source - Giáo viên.pdf ✅

T h ầ y H i ệ p S Đ T : 0 9 0 6 1 1 5 1 7 1 Page 1 of 6 Mr. Hiep’s English Classes Electricity Production in Germany Electricity Production in Germany by Source (TW-h) TOPIC: The graph below shows electricity production (in terawatt hours) in Germany between 1980 and 2010. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. Write at least 150 words. STRUCTURE: Introduction: 01 sentence Bước 01: Phân tích đề bài và xác định keywords. Tìm cách “PARAPHRASE” các keywords chính trong đề bài để viết introduction. Ví dụ: Electricity production (in TW-h) => the amount of electricity produced By source => using four different sources of power; from four separate energy sources; from four diverse power sources 1980-2010 => over a period of 30 years; over a 30-year span; over a 30-year period; over 30 years, starting from 1980 INTRODUCTION MẪU: The line graph compares the amount of electricity produced in Germany using four different sources of power over a period of 30 years. EXERCISE: Tự viết lại introduction bên trên theo ít nhất 3 cách khác nhau: Cách 01: __________________________________________________________________________________________________ __________________________________________________________________________________________________ 150 210 70 60 50 70 60 70 210 300 355 395 430 400 70 140 140 140 140 140 140 1 2 3 4 5 10 25 1980 1985 1990 1995 2000 2005 2010 amount of electricity produced (in terawatt hours) Years ELECTRICITY PRODUCTION IN GERMANY BY SOURCE (TW-H) Thermal Nuclear Hydroelectric Renewables
T h ầ y H i ệ p S Đ T : 0 9 0 6 1 1 5 1 7 1 Page 2 of 6 Cách 02: __________________________________________________________________________________________________ __________________________________________________________________________________________________ Cách 03: __________________________________________________________________________________________________ __________________________________________________________________________________________________ SAMPLE ANSWERS: Cách 01: The graph illustrates the comparison of electricity (1) generation in Germany from four distinct power (2) sources over a 32-year (3) span. Cách 02: The line chart depicts the varying (4) levels of electricity production in Germany from four (5) separate energy sources over a 32-year period. Cách 03: This line chart presents a comparative analysis of electricity (6) output from four diverse energy sources in Germany over 32 years, (7) starting from 1980. CHALLENGE: Viết lại introduction bên trên sử dụng “COMPARES”... “IN TERMS OF”... Hint: sử dụng các keywords sau: “electricity production”, “power sources”, “output levels” / “the amount generated from each source” __________________________________________________________________________________________________ __________________________________________________________________________________________________ The line graph compares the electricity production in Germany from four different power sources in terms of their output levels over a 32-year period. The line graph compares the electricity production in Germany from four different power sources in terms of the amount generated from each source over a 32-year period. OVERVIEW: 02 sentence Nêu ra những đặc điểm nổi bật nhất như: - Cao nhất, thấp nhất - Xu hướng ÁP DỤNG VÀO BÀI NÀY: - Cao nhất, thấp nhất: nuclear power (the most important means of electricity generation) >< renewables (provided the lowest amount of electricity in each year) - Xu hướng: thermal power’s dominance decreased >< nuclear energy, hydroelectric power and renewable energy sources saw rises in electricity output/production OVERVIEW MẪU: Over the period from 1980 to 2010, nuclear power was BY FAR the most significant means of electricity generation, while renewables consistently provided the lowest amount of electricity each year. It is also evident that, during this time, the dominance of thermal power decreased, whereas there was an increase in electricity output from nuclear energy, hydroelectric power, and renewable energy sources. KEYWORD TABLE: Nuclear power = nuclear energy = nuclear sources; hydroelectric and renewable sources The most significant means of electricity generation = the primary source of electricity generation = the dominant electricity producer = the foremost electricity generation method Provided the lowest amount each year = contributed the least each year = remained the least utilized source annually = yielded the smallest electricity contribution each year The dominance = the prevalence of = the influence
T h ầ y H i ệ p S Đ T : 0 9 0 6 1 1 5 1 7 1 Page 3 of 6 An increase in electricity output = the rising output = growth in electricity production = an upsurge in electricity generation EXERCISE: Tự viết lại OVERVIEW bên trên theo ít nhất 3 cách khác nhau: Cách 01: __________________________________________________________________________________________________ __________________________________________________________________________________________________ __________________________________________________________________________________________________ __________________________________________________________________________________________________ Cách 02: __________________________________________________________________________________________________ __________________________________________________________________________________________________ __________________________________________________________________________________________________ __________________________________________________________________________________________________ Cách 03: __________________________________________________________________________________________________ __________________________________________________________________________________________________ __________________________________________________________________________________________________ __________________________________________________________________________________________________ SAMPLE ANSWERS: Cách 01: From 1980 to 2010, nuclear energy significantly (1) led as the primary source of electricity (2) generation, with renewable sources (3) contributing the least each year. Additionally, this era saw a decline in the (4) prevalence of thermal power, in (5) contrast to the rising (6) output from nuclear, hydroelectric, and renewable energies. Cách 02: Throughout the three decades from 1980 to 2010, nuclear power notably (7) stood out as the dominant electricity (8) producer, overshadowing renewables, (9) which remained the least (10) utilized source annually. During these years, thermal power's (11) influence waned, while nuclear, hydroelectric, and renewable sources experienced (12) growth in electricity production. Cách 03: Between 1980 and 2010, the (13) role of nuclear power as the (14) foremost electricity generation method was unmistakable, in (15) stark contrast to renewables, which (16) yielded the smallest electricity contribution each year. This period also marked a (17) shift from thermal power's dominance to an (18) upsurge in electricity generation from nuclear, hydroelectric, and renewable sources. DETAIL 01: 03 sentence CÂU 01: Bắt đầu với năm đầu tiên (1980) và đường cao nhất (thermal power) - In 1980; thermal power stations; the main source of electricity in Germany; generated 150 terawatt hours of power Cách 01: Dùng cấu trúc NGUYÊN NHÂN-HỆ QUẢ: S + V, V-ING. __________________________________________________________________________________________________ __________________________________________________________________________________________________ Cách 02: Dùng đại từ quan hệ WHICH để nối: CHUNG CHUNG, WHICH + CỤ THỂ: __________________________________________________________________________________________________ __________________________________________________________________________________________________
T h ầ y H i ệ p S Đ T : 0 9 0 6 1 1 5 1 7 1 Page 4 of 6 Cách 03: Dùng mệnh đề giản lược cho cách 02 bên trên: __________________________________________________________________________________________________ __________________________________________________________________________________________________ SAMPLE ANSWERS: Cách 01: In 1980, thermal power stations were the main (1) source of electricity in Germany, (2) GENERATING around 150 terawatt hours of power. Cách 02: In 1980, the (3) primary source of electricity in Germany was thermal power stations, (4) WHICH produced approximately 150 terawatt hours of power. Cách 03: In 1980, the primary source of electricity in Germany was thermal power (5) stations, PRODUCING approximately 150 terawatt hours of power. CÂU 02: Bắt đầu với năm đầu tiên (1980) và các đường còn lại. - Nuclear and hydroelectric power plants; produced 75 terawatt hours of electricity each; renewable energy sources provided a negligible amount Cách 01: Dùng cấu trúc câu GHÉP (COMPOUND SENTENCE): S + V (independent clause), FAN BOYS S + V (independent clause). __________________________________________________________________________________________________ __________________________________________________________________________________________________ Cách 02: Dùng cấu trúc câu: S + V (independent clause), WITH __________ (mệnh đề giản lược: reduced clause). __________________________________________________________________________________________________ __________________________________________________________________________________________________ Cách 03: Dùng cấu trúc câu: S + V (independent clause), IN CONTRAST TO ____________. __________________________________________________________________________________________________ __________________________________________________________________________________________________ SAMPLE ANSWERS: Cách 01: Nuclear and hydroelectric power stations (1) produced just under 75 terawatt hours of electricity each, (2) AND renewables provided a (3) negligible amount. Cách 02: Both nuclear and hydroelectric power stations were (4) responsible for producing nearly 75 terawatt hours of electricity each, WITH renewables (5) OFFERING only a (6) trivial amount. Cách 03: Nuclear and hydroelectric facilities each (7) contributed just below 75 terawatt hours to electricity production, IN (8) CONTRAST TO the negligible (9) output from renewable energy sources. CÂU 03: Đề cập đến năm đặc biệt 1985 khi nuclear power OVERTOOK thermal power để trở thành nguồn cung cấp điện chính ở Đức: Cách 01: Dùng từ OVERTOOK/SURPASSED/ECLIPSED: __________________________________________________________________________________________________