Tiêu đề Lecture note - Lesson 3 + 4.docx ✅

REVISION The art of paraphrasing Two – part question
W7.0 – L4: ADVANTAGES & DISADVANTAGES + DISCUSS BOTH VIEWS I. ADVANTAGES & DISADVANTAGES Do the advantages of private healthcare outweigh the disadvantages? Do you think this is a positive or negative development? => Áp dụng outline compare nhưng câu 2 và 14 thì mình add thêm câu trả lời: lợi > hại => positive development => This is a positive development// This is a positive trend // This is a welcome development // this development is net positive // this trend is overall positive hại > lợi => negative development => This is a unwelcome development // #1 – LISTING - OUTLINE #2 - COMPARE TOOL 1: ANTITHESIS (phản đề/ dìm hàng) Giả sử: Hại < Lợi Body 1: Hại - Hại 1 - Hại 2 => Antithesis Body 2: Lợi - Lợi 1
- Lợi 2
Many governments are investing in widening roads to tackle traffic issues. Do you think the advantages of this development outweigh the disadvantages? Specify đề: Traffic issues = What? What? Traffic congestion => pro 1: ease traffic congestion Road accidents // safety => pro 2: reduce the risk of traffic accidents Con 1: burden on state budgets Con 2: effects on nearby residents Option 1: Disadvantages > Advantages (Model: …Short - term vs Long - term) Body 1: Advantages: - Idea 1: Reduce the risk of accidents - Idea 2: Ease traffic congestion - Antithesis: Nevertheless/However, I think that this effect is only …of short - term relevance… while …in the long run…, widened roads would encourage car use, meaning that these roads would eventually become congested again. Body 2: Disadvantages - Idea 1: Burden on state budgets - Idea 2: Effects on nearby residents ⇒ Chốt: Long - term/ Short - term Idea: Topic => positive/ negative effect Antithesis: This effect = only short - term/ temporary while in the long term, phủ định effect