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Year 4 Writing Week 10 4016b
What we did well What we need to focus on TOPIC:4014b Boat Flashback ● Most people wrote a title ● Most people are planning ● Everyone is writing in paragraphs ● Everyone is attempting a flashback ● Vocabulary from class is being included ● Dialogue is used effectively ● Many people are developing the character traits well ● Some people switched from third person pronouns to first. ● Spelling often needs editing ● Remember to use the start to the story given if you are asked to do so. ● Flashbacks need to be short and not most of the story. ● Make sure that the main character solves any problems. Don’t have her rescued. It’s the flashback that gets her through.
5) Jennys sisters dog looks like a wolf. Jenny’s sister’s dog looks like a wolf. 6) All the bridesmaids dresses were green. All the bridesmaids’ dresses were green. 7) Jessies cat Fluffy has had six kittens. Jessie’s cat Fluffy has had six kittens. 8) The ponies tails and manes were tangled. The ponies’ tails and manes were tangled. 9) Those four footballers skills are fantastic. Those four footballers’ skills are fantastic. 10) Dad said he was going to the mens room. Dad said he was going to the men’s room.
4015 punctuation correction 1) The dentists chair is quite a scary place. The dentist’s chair is quite a scary place. 2) I caught a cold at the doctors surgery. I caught a cold at the doctor’s surgery. 3) The choirs songs were lovely to hear. The choirs’ songs were lovely to hear. 4) Every one of the singers voices was in tune. Every one of the singers’ voices was in tune.