Tiêu đề [LECTURE NOTE] W7.0 - L7_ CONNECT SENTENCES.pdf ✅

WRITING MARKING CRITERIA TA Address ALL PARTS of question =>>> Types of essay (Comparing + Listing) Idea development >>> L3,4,5 CC Coherence =>>> Logic idea development >>> L6 Cohesion =>>> Cohesive devices >>> L7 LR Word Pattern Collocation Topic-specific vocabulary >>> L1 GRA Write an error-free sentence >>> L2 W7.0 - L7: CONNECT SENTENCES Model 1 LINKING WORDS A → B. [LW], C Model 2 REFERENCING A → B. B → C Model 3 STRUCTURES A → B, C DOL ĐÌNH LỰC DOL ĐÌNH LỰC - COPYRIGHT - KHÔNG COPY DƯỚI BẤT KỲ HÌNH THỨC NÀO
LƯU Ý: Luôn cân nhắc đi theo trình tự ưu tiên: IDEA => MODEL => STRUCTURE Linking Word A → B. [LW], C Referencing A → B. B → C Structures A → B, C ↓ ↓ ↓ Expand Cause The reason for this is that ... In fact, ... This can derive/ stem from N This can be attributed to N ... because SV ... due to N Regarding the first idea, SV Chief among these is that SV Effect Therefore, SV As a result, SV Consequently, SV As a consequence, SV Hence, SV This + VP This/These/Such N + VP , which can result in N → possibly resulting in N , which means that SV → meaning that SV , thereby Ving , and thus V/ SV Idea 1 ↙ ↘ ↑ (+) (-) Introduce an idea ← CONNECT SENTENCES → Develop an idea ↓ Example For example, For instance, ... By way of illustration, ... This can be exemplified by the fact that SV X Idea 2 As far as the second idea is concerned, SV Another point worth mentioning is that SV Hypothesis X If (not/no) SV1, SV2 Without such N, SV X DOL ĐÌNH LỰC DOL ĐÌNH LỰC - COPYRIGHT - KHÔNG COPY DƯỚI BẤT KỲ HÌNH THỨC NÀO
MODEL 2: REFERENCING [1] This + VP [2] This/ These/ Such + N + VP → repetition (+adj) → synonyms → word form (V/adj → N) → generalization (category) [3] SV1, SV2. This/ These/ Such NOUN + VP EXAMPLE Repetition (+adj) + Many advertisements use exaggeration techniques. Such techniques may deceive customers and encourage them to purchase products of low quality. + The government decided to tighten the existing policies to deter poaching. These strict policies can potentially help save several endangered animals. Synonyms + The government should quickly carry out measures to encourage people to leave rural areas. These solutions/ remedies/ approaches are essential to maintain a sufficient number of agricultural workers. Word Form (V/ Adj >>> N) + The government should provide schools in rural areas with better facilities and more well-qualified teachers. Such provision can significantly improve the quality of teaching in these areas. + Some companies may exaggerate their products via advertisements. Such exaggeration may deceive customers and encourage them to purchase products of low quality. + Online shoppers often feel disappointed about their ordered products when they receive them since these items are different from what they expect. → This disappointment can discourage people from choosing this way of shopping ... → This difference can discourage people from choosing this way of shopping ... → This negative feeling/ shopping experience can discourage people from choosing this way of shopping ... DOL ĐÌNH LỰC DOL ĐÌNH LỰC - COPYRIGHT - KHÔNG COPY DƯỚI BẤT KỲ HÌNH THỨC NÀO