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The bar chart below shows the percentage participation of men in senior development in three companies between 1980 and the year 2010. Summarise the information by selecting and report in the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. Write at least 150 words Introduction The bar chart provides a comparative analysis of the male participation in senior development positions within three tech giants: IBM, Microsoft, and Apple over a span of thirty years, from 1980 to 2010. Summary/Overview A general trend of increasing male representation in senior roles was exhibited by all three companies over the period. However, IBM manifested a remarkable surge, evolving from the least male participation in 1980 to the most by 2010. Detail 1 In 1980, Apple was at the forefront with 15% of its senior development positions occupied by men, while Microsoft had around 7%. IBM started with the lowest, a mere 3% male participation. A decade later, there was a slight increase and convergence in the percentages, each company marking a male participation rate around 10-12%. Detail 2 Post-1990, a transformative growth was observed, particularly in IBM, where the percentage soared to 50% by 2010. Microsoft also experienced a substantial uptick, reaching 45%. Conversely, Apple exhibited a more modest growth, culminating at about 25% male representation in senior roles by the end of the period.