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WRITING 9 – PROS & CONS Do the advantages of … outweigh the disadvantages? / Is it a positive or negative development? NO NO NO: ● equal: unclear position → 6 Task Response ● … has BOTH pros and cons (listing) → 5 Task Response there are clear benefits of X ● advantages = benefits = merits => beneficial = advantageous ● disadvantages = drawbacks = demerits = shortcomings => disadvantageous= detrimental ( have an adverse effect on / adverse bearing on) TEMPLATE Do the advantages of … outweigh the disadvantages? (Position: Cons > Pros) ( bất lợi hơn lợi ích) Introduction 1, Paraphrase Normally: fact =/= opinion One school of thought holds that / It is believed that … (Opinion) It is widely recognized/ true that/ a matter of fact that … (fact) 2, Answer: While this (...)admittedly has certain benefits, I would argue that the drawbacks are far more significant. (lợi ích hơn bất lợi ) : While this admittedly has certain DRAWBACKS, I would argue that the benefits are far more significant Body 1 - Benefits to what extent 1, Topic sentence: On the one hand, … can be beneficial to a certain extent. / the advantages of … are clear to a certain extent / EVIDENT there are several benefits =>NO NO NO 2, Benefit 1: One prominent advantage is that … it is flexible 3, Further explain / Give a relevant example


On the other hand, I am convinced that the aforementioned benefits pale in significance when compared to the glaring drawbacks of such a move. One major problem is that a massive influx of businesses and migrants could strain rural resources and infrastructure, which could give rise to such problems as higher traffic volumes or soaring rental prices. This is compounded by the fact that migrating to the countryside might entail a host of incurred costs for companies, rather than help them save money. This can be seen in the way businesses might face substantial expenses in constructing facilities from scratch and establishing efficient supply chains in these isolated areas. The amount of money initially saved on real estate could be quickly overshadowed by these colossal additional costs. In conclusion, despite certain benefits that moving businesses to rural locations can confer, I would contend that the disadvantages are far more pronounced. (2 câu cũng được ) Advantages: 2 > Disadvantages: 0 VER 2: PROS > CONS : giải quyết tác hại Intro lợi ích hơn tác hại => solutions Body 1: tác hại 1 → giải quyết tác hại 1 Body 2: tác hại 2 → giải quyết tác hại 2 (optional) Body 3: lợi ích Conclusion In response to mounting housing and transport problems in urban centers, many governments are advocating for businesses to relocate to rural locations. With thoughtful planning and strategic implementation, I believe this scheme can bring about greater benefits overall. One primary concern with shifting businesses to rural areas is the potential lack of skilled labor. Urban areas typically have a more diverse talent pool due to their educational institutions and cosmopolitan nature. However, this challenge can be