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T h ầ y H i ệ p S Đ T : 0 9 0 6 1 1 5 1 7 1 Page 1 of 4 Mr. Hiep’s English Classes The use of public libraries The use of public libraries in 1990 and 2000 in Britain TOPIC: The pie charts show figures for the use of public libraries in 1990 and 2000 in Britain. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant. PHÂN TÍCH BẢN CHẤT: NGƯỜI ĐẾN LIBRARY: LIBRARY GOERS! • Library patrons • Library visitors • Library users • Book borrowers • Library clientele • Library members • Library regulars • Library attendees PARAPHRASING CHO DẠNG PIE CHART CÓ PHẦN TRĂM: – Ví dụ: 65% (phần lớn >50%) những người đến thư viện vào năm 1990 là để mượn sách và trả sách. 1. ACCOUNTING FOR: In 1990, a majority of visitors, accounting for 65%, attended libraries to borrow or return books. 2. ACCOUNTED FOR: Borrowing or returning books accounted for 65% of the reasons why visitors went to libraries in 1990. 3. THE PRIMARY REASON FOR: In 1990, borrowing or returning books was the primary reason for 65% of library visits. 4. LIBRARY GOERS: 65% of library goers in 1990 visited to either borrow or return books. 5. AMOUNTING TO: Amounting to 65%, a majority of the library's patrons in 1990 visited for the purpose of borrowing or returning books. 6. CONSTITUTING: Those constituting 65% of library visitors in 1990 were engaged in borrowing or returning books. 7. MAKING UP: In 1990, visitors making up 65% of the library's foot traffic were there to borrow or return books. Borrow or return books 65% Obtain information 10% Study 10% Read newspaper or magazine 15% Borrow or return videos 0% 1990 290 MILLION VISITS Borrow or return books 55% Obtain information 20% Study 2% Read newspaper or magazine 5% Borrow or return videos 18% 2000 350 MILLION VISITS
T h ầ y H i ệ p S Đ T : 0 9 0 6 1 1 5 1 7 1 Page 2 of 4 8. REPRESENTING: In 1990, those representing 65% of library attendees primarily came to borrow or return books. 9. COMPRISING: Individuals comprising 65% of the library's regulars in 1990 were mainly there to borrow or return books. 10. FORMING: In 1990, a group forming 65% of the library clientele focused on borrowing or returning books. 11. COMPOSING: Those composing 65% of the library's foot traffic in 1990 were primarily involved in borrowing or returning books. 12. CONTRIBUTED TO: In 1990, visitors who contributed to 65% of the library's usage were mostly borrowing or returning books. INTRODUCTION: 01 sentence Cách 01: __________________________________________________________________________________________________ __________________________________________________________________________________________________ __________________________________________________________________________________________________ Cách 02: __________________________________________________________________________________________________ __________________________________________________________________________________________________ __________________________________________________________________________________________________ The pie charts compare the purposes for visits (1) to public libraries in Britain in the years 1990 and 2000. The pie charts compare the usage (2) patterns of public libraries in Britain in 1990 and 2000. The pie charts present a comparison of the (3) percentages representing different reasons for visiting public libraries in Britain in the years 1990 and 2000. The pie charts compare the percentage-based (4) reasons for public library visits in Britain in 1990 and 2000. The pie charts compare the percentage (5) distribution of visit purposes to British public libraries in 1990 and 2000. OVERVIEW: 02 sentence Cách 01: __________________________________________________________________________________________________ __________________________________________________________________________________________________ __________________________________________________________________________________________________ __________________________________________________________________________________________________ Cách 02: __________________________________________________________________________________________________ __________________________________________________________________________________________________ __________________________________________________________________________________________________ __________________________________________________________________________________________________ Overall, while the total number of (1) visits to public libraries increased from 290 million to 350 million over the decade, there was a (2) diversification in the activities (3) patrons/visitors engaged in, with a notable (4) rise in the borrowing of videos and seeking information. Overall, while the total number of visits to public libraries in Britain rose over the decade, the data indicates a (5) shift in the primary reasons for (6) visiting, with a dramatic rise in borrowing videos and a notable fall in reading newspapers or magazines at the library. DETAIL 01: 03 sentence CÂU 01: Cách 01: __________________________________________________________________________________________________
T h ầ y H i ệ p S Đ T : 0 9 0 6 1 1 5 1 7 1 Page 3 of 4 __________________________________________________________________________________________________ Cách 02: __________________________________________________________________________________________________ __________________________________________________________________________________________________ In 1990, a majority of visitors, (1) accounting for 65%, (2) attended libraries to borrow or return books. In 1990, a majority, 65%, of the 290 million visits were (3) for borrowing or returning books. CÂU 02: Cách 01: __________________________________________________________________________________________________ __________________________________________________________________________________________________ Cách 02: __________________________________________________________________________________________________ __________________________________________________________________________________________________ Reading newspapers or magazines was the next most common (1) reason, (2) comprising 15% of visits, (3) followed by studying and obtaining information, each (4) constituting 10%. Reading newspapers or magazines (5) accounted for 15%, (6) while studying and obtaining information were equally (7) prevalent at 10% each. DETAIL 02: 03 sentence CÂU 01: Cách 01: __________________________________________________________________________________________________ __________________________________________________________________________________________________ Cách 02: __________________________________________________________________________________________________ __________________________________________________________________________________________________ By contrast, by 2000, although borrowing or returning books remained the (1) primary reason for library (2) visits, its proportion had (3) decreased to 55%. By 2000, despite the total visits increasing to 350 million, the (4) proportion of visits for borrowing or returning books had (5) declined to 55%. CÂU 02: Cách 01: __________________________________________________________________________________________________ __________________________________________________________________________________________________ Cách 02: __________________________________________________________________________________________________ __________________________________________________________________________________________________ Remarkably, the category of borrowing or returning videos, which was not present in 1990, (1) emerged to represent 18% of the total visits in 2000. The most notable change was in the (2) category of borrowing or returning videos, which (3) surged from non-existence to 18% of the total visits. CÂU 03: Cách 01: __________________________________________________________________________________________________
T h ầ y H i ệ p S Đ T : 0 9 0 6 1 1 5 1 7 1 Page 4 of 4 __________________________________________________________________________________________________ Cách 02: __________________________________________________________________________________________________ __________________________________________________________________________________________________ There was also a noticeable (1) shift towards obtaining information, which (2) doubled to 20% of visits. There was a (3) marked trend towards the (4) acquisition of information, which saw its proportion increase to 20% of visits. CÂU 04: Cách 01: __________________________________________________________________________________________________ __________________________________________________________________________________________________ Cách 02: __________________________________________________________________________________________________ __________________________________________________________________________________________________ Conversely, the percentages for reading newspapers or magazines and studying (1) plummeted to 5% and 2%, (2) respectively. In contrast, the (3) figures for reading newspapers or magazines, and studying experienced a significant (4) decline, falling to 5% and 2%, respectively. A COMPLETE ANSWER: The pie charts describe a (1) comparison of the reasons for visiting public libraries in Britain across a decade from 1990 and 2000. There was an overall (2) rise in library (3) visits from 290 million to 350 million during the ten-year (4) span. This period also saw a (5) diversification in user activities, particularly with an increased (6) interest in video lending and information (7) retrieval. In 1990, the predominant activity for 65% of (8) library-goers was the lending and returning of books. This was followed by the reading of newspapers or magazines, (9) which constituted 15% of the reasons for visits, and then studying and information gathering, each at 10%. In stark (10) contrast, by the year 2000, even though the lending and returning of books continued to be the most common (11) purpose, it saw a decrease in its (12) share to 55%. Notably, the activity of lending and returning videos, (13) absent in the earlier data, (14) surfaced as a significant reason, (15) accounting for 18% of visits. Additionally, the (16) pursuit of information showed a significant increase, (17) rising to 20% of visits. On the other hand, the (18) proportion of visitors reading newspapers or magazines and those studying saw a (19) steep decline to 5% and 2%, (20) respectively.