Tiêu đề 6.0 - Sugar-based drinks (updated).pdf ✅

CAUSES & SOLUTIONS More and more people today are drinking sugar-based drinks. What are the reasons for this? What are the solutions to make people drink less? PARAPHRASING PHRASES: More and more people - An increasing number of people - It is becoming more common for people to... Sugar-based drinks - Beverages containing sugar - Sugary drinks - Soft drinks with sugar - Drinks high in sugar content USE LINEARTHINKING® TO MAKE AN OUTLINE: Specify ▶ What are sugar-based drinks? → Coke, milk tea, energy drinks, etc. Body 1: Causes Body 2: Solutions Linear models: Idea: [Cause] → [Topic] Expand/Example: [Cause’] → [Topic’] ▶ [Coke] Idea: Soft-drink companies heavily promote their products → people are constantly exposed to such advertisements + be tempted to buy such drinks. Ex: companies such as Pepsi have been teaming up with other fast-food chains to promote their beverages → more consumers opting for these drinks. ▶ [milktea] Linear models: Idea: [Solution] → [Topic] Example: [Solution’] → [Topic’] ▶ [governments] Idea: launch public information campaigns → dissuade the consumption of sugar-based drinks Ex: posters which show the caloric content of popular soft drinks like Coca-Cola and Sprite, along with the recommended level of sugar intake → discourage students from choosing these drinks. ▶ [health organisations] This document is copyrighted. Redistribution in any way is strictly prohibited. Tài liệu này thuộc quyền sở hữu trí tuệ của DOL English. Mọi hành vi sao chép và phân phối trái phép là vi phạm pháp luật.
Idea: invest in developing new products → reach more potential consumers Expand: New flavors are regularly introduced → enhance the appeal of such beverages + attract many young customers ▶ [energy drinks] Idea: modern lifestyle → consume sugary beverages. Ex: (Vietnamese college students)need to stay up all night to study when stressful examinations are approaching → opt for Red Bull and other energy boosters. Idea: give advice on → how to cut down the consumption of sugary drinks. Ex: try to convince consumers to replace drinks high in sugar content with healthier choices or less-sugar alternatives (tea or black coffee) → allow busy individuals to stay awake without consuming too many energy drinks. ▶ [companies/schools] → reduce the demands of work/studying → give employees/students enough time for proper rest → prevent dependency on energy drinks ✏️ Sample essay The consumption of sugar-containing drinks is on the rise. This can be attributed to several factors, which calls for possible solutions to be adopted. There are various reasons why an increasing number of people are turning to sugar-based beverages. One possible explanation is that because soft-drink companies heavily promote their products, several people can be constantly exposed to these advertisements and therefore be tempted to buy such drinks. For example, companies such as Pepsi have been teaming up with other fast-food chains to promote their beverages, which may lead to more consumers opting for these drinks. Another point worth mentioning is that modern lifestyle also causes some people to consume sugary beverages. This is very common among Vietnamese college students, as they need to stay up all night to study when stressful examinations are approaching, which is why many opt for Red Bull and other energy boosters. This document is copyrighted. Redistribution in any way is strictly prohibited. Tài liệu này thuộc quyền sở hữu trí tuệ của DOL English. Mọi hành vi sao chép và phân phối trái phép là vi phạm pháp luật.