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Year 4 Writing Week 2 4018b
4016b Feedback - Superhero What we did well How we could improve ● People wrote a good series of events with some high tension. ● Not everyone included a strong flashback such as this ‘ Suddenly, her Dad’s words echoed in her head. ‘ Be the light in the darkness.’ ● Nearly everyone remembered to write a title ● Some interesting details were written ‘ She realised the cookie gave her more strength and power ● Good use of time words:next, Meanwhile, etc. ● Write a clear introduction that introduces the superhero by name, their powers and gives any necessary background information. ● We need to name our superhero an original idea like Evil Ethan or Speedy Stella. ● You need to describe the superhero’s outfit and powers.