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Y4 Writing Week 2 Term 4 Park or Shopping Centre? 4026b
401b Feedback - What we did well How we could improve ● Overall, letters were correctly set out: address, date, salutation, and sign-off ● Nearly everyone wrote in paragraphs ● Good details and interesting descriptions were included ● Those who get the Powerpoint from institute.com tend to have the best responses. ● Some people needed to write more descriptions of their interesting events ● Remember to take a new line after Dear Grandma, ● Some children forgot to say something personal, such as, ‘How are you’, Hope to see you soon’. I letter is like a conversation - make it personal
Punctuation check- 4025b 1) Ged walked through the doors to perform for the judges. “Are you sure you can do this, Ged? Of course you can!” he told himself. __________________________________________________ 2) “Are you having a good time?” shouted the singer to the crowd, but unfortunately, nobody replied. __________________________________________________ 3) “No way am I going there! Do you think I’m crazy?” muttered Tom as he backed away from the open door of the lion cage.
4) My Grandad says he wears a wig to keep him looking young! My mum says he wears it to keep his head warm! __________________________________________________ 5) When my Mum asked me, “How did you find school today son?” I told her, “I just walked to the end of our street and turned left.” __________________________________________________ 6) “What on earth do you think you’re doing Stan?” asked my Grandma. __________________________________________________ 7) “What kind of question is that?” snapped my Grandma. Mark: /7