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Y4 Writing Week 3 Term 4 4027b
4025b Feedback - Changing Schools (friendly letter) What we did well How we could improve ● Overall, letters were correctly set out: address, date, salutation, and sign-off ● Descriptions of feelings were generally good. ● Some great plans were written ● The best letters had interesting details. ● Remember to complete the punctuation task. ● Remember to format the address and date correctly. ● Some people needed to write more descriptions of their new house and school. ● Avoid lists of ideas ● Write in paragraphs ● Try writing a draft and editing before writing a good copy. ● Edit out, or change small words such as big.