Title IELTS WRITING TASK 2-OPINION-IS IT A POSITIVE OR NEGATIVE TREND-Giáo viên.pdf ✅

T h ầ y H i ệ p S Đ T : 0 9 0 6 1 1 5 1 7 1 Page 2 of 4 2. HẠI NHIỀU HƠN LỢI: Storing sensitive personal data online, such as banking and contact information, is a (6) growing trend. (7) However, I argue that this trend is more negative, as the risks of data (8) breaches and privacy (9) loss outweigh the (10) convenience it provides. CÁCH VIẾT CONCLUSION CHO DẠNG CÂU HỎI “IS IT A POSITIVE OR NEGATIVE TREND?” CONCLUSION: Cần làm được HAI NHIỆM VỤ CHÍNH ở CONCLUSION của dạng OPINION ESSAY: 1. Reintroduce the topic: giới thiệu lại chủ đề chính 2. Re-answer the question: trả lời lại câu hỏi của đề bài. 1. STRONG OPINION: __________________________________________________________________________________________________ __________________________________________________________________________________________________ __________________________________________________________________________________________________ __________________________________________________________________________________________________ __________________________________________________________________________________________________ 2. BALANCED OPINION: __________________________________________________________________________________________________ __________________________________________________________________________________________________ __________________________________________________________________________________________________ __________________________________________________________________________________________________ __________________________________________________________________________________________________ SAMPLE ANSWERS: 1. LỢI NHIỀU HƠN HẠI: In conclusion, I hold the opinion that the advantages of the internet, especially its convenience and global (1) connectivity, outweigh the negatives of reduced physical (2) interaction. While acknowledging these challenges, I believe that the internet's role in opening new interaction (3) avenues is predominantly positive, as long as a (4) balance between online and offline lives is maintained. 2. HẠI NHIỀU HƠN LỢI: In conclusion, I firmly believe that while the internet (5) undeniably simplifies shopping, working, and communication, its (6) overreliance as a substitute for face-to-face interaction (7) represents a negative development. In my opinion, it is crucial to find a (8) balance, leveraging the benefits of digital technology while also (9) preserving the essential value of physical human (10) connections, to (11) ensure both individual well-being and societal (12) cohesion. EXERCISE: Áp dụng cách viết CONCLUSION trên cho bài sau: “Some people store personal and private information online, including banking, contacts and addresses. Is it a positive or negative trend?” 1. LỢI NHIỀU HƠN HẠI: __________________________________________________________________________________________________ __________________________________________________________________________________________________ __________________________________________________________________________________________________ __________________________________________________________________________________________________ 2. HẠI NHIỀU HƠN LỢI: