Content text Parallelism-updated-lecture-sheet-by-breeding-ground.pdf
In Lists When listing items, make sure each item follows the same grammatical form. Incorrect: I enjoy reading, to write, and drawing. She likes swimming, to bike, and to run. He wants to learn how to cook, playing guitar, and dance. Correct: I enjoy reading, writing, and drawing. ( all gerunds) She likes to swim, bike, and run. ( all infinitives) He wants to learn how to cook, play guitar, and dance. ( all infinitives) With Correlative Conjunctions Correlative conjunctions ( a conjunction is a word that connects words, phrases, clauses, or sentences) are pairs like either...or, neither...nor, both...and, not only...but also. Incorrect: She is not only intelligent but hardworking. Either you start now , you will miss the deadline Not only did he win the race, but he set a new record. Correct: She is not only intelligent but also hardworking. ( not only ......but also) Either you start now or you will miss the deadline.( either .....or) He not only won the race but also set a new record. ( not only....but also)
In Comparisons When making comparisons, ensure the elements being compared are in the same form. Incorrect: Running is faster than to walk. She is smarter and dedicated than her sisters. Correct: Running is faster than walking. (all gerunds) She is smarter and more dedicated than her sisters. (superlative degree to show extreme comparison) In parts of speech a noun should be grouped with other nouns, an adjective with other adjectives, an adverb with other adverbs and so on. ● Not parallel: The company is looking for a candidate who is friendly, organized, meticulous, and is going to arrive to work on time. ● Parallel: The company is looking for a candidate who is friendly, organized, meticulous, and punctual.(all adjectives) ● The movie was exciting, thrilling, and suspenseful. ( all adjectives) ● She sang beautifully, danced gracefully, and performed perfectly.( all adverbs) ● Running, swimming, and biking are great forms of exercise. ( all gerunds)