Title Task 2 - Sample 6.0 ✅

DOL English SAMPLE 1 The internet has transformed the way information is shared and consumed, but it has also created problems that did not exist before. What are the most serious problems associated with this development? What are the possible solutions? Làm rõ information Problems share too much personal information on social media platforms (Facebook, Twitter) → increase the risk of being hacked and harassed Effect: stress, anxiety and other complicated consequences → lead to a decline in the victims’ quality of life unverified online sources of health information → contain misleading or wrong knowledge Example: the case of the anti-vaccine movement → cause several parents to decide not to vaccinate their children. Solutions Internet users → set strong passwords for social media accounts + avoid sharing private information. Effect: reinforce the security of their accounts → lower the chance of their private information being stolen The government and social media companies → join forces to take some actions to reduce cyber threats Example: start by introducing heavy punishments on hackers and Internet fraud + banning websites that are dangerous for people. It is true that the way people find and share information has been transformed by the Internet. This can cause different problems, which calls for possible solutions to be adopted. There are many problems resulting from information being shared online. One obvious issue is that sharing too much personal information on social media platforms such as Facebook and Twitter can increase the risk of being hacked and harassed. This can result in stress, anxiety and other complicated consequences, and therefore lead to a decline in the victims’ quality of life. Another potential problem is that there are many
DOL English unverified online sources of health information which contain misleading or wrong knowledge. This can be exemplified by the case of the anti-vaccine movement, which causes several parents to decide not to vaccinate their children. Various measures, nevertheless, can be adopted to tackle the situation. The first possible solution is that Internet users have to set strong passwords for social media accounts and avoid sharing private information. As a result, they can reinforce the security of their accounts in order to lower the chance of their private information being stolen. The second approach is that the government and social media companies should join forces to take some actions to reduce cyber threats. By way of illustration, they can start by introducing heavy punishments on hackers and Internet fraud or banning websites that are dangerous for people. In conclusion, although the fact that data is being shared largely and at a faster pace than before produces some negative impacts, steps can be taken to address the issue. (263 words) In BOLD = CC Underlined = Grammar Colors = Relationships between ideas SAMPLE 2 Consumers are faced with increasing numbers of advertisements from competing companies. To what extent do you think consumers are influenced by advertisements? What measures can be taken to protect them? Làm rõ adverts sản phẩm nào → cosmetics, clothes on FB... Problems: Problem 1: various commercials (those for cosmetic products) → promote unrealistic beauty standards → cause their audiences (teenagers) to become obsessed with body image and idealism Effect: → low self-esteem + several mental disorders (depression) if people fail to achieve their idea of perfection Problem 2: some advertisements on social media platforms → contain misleading information → give customers a false idea about the products.