Title TABLE-Daily Activities of Unemployed Men and Women in the UK - Giáo viên.pdf ✅

T h ầ y H i ệ p S Đ T : 0 9 0 6 1 1 5 1 7 1 Page 3 of 4 3. LEXICAL RESOURCE: The use of vocabulary is more accurate for describing the information in the chart. There is better use of adverbs and collocations, so it sounds more natural. 4. GRAMMATICAL RANGE AND ACCURACY: This answer has more grammatical errors and less variety of structures. SAMPLE ANSWER: BAND 6 LEVEL The table shows how British unemployed people spent their time last year. The information is divided into the afternoon and the morning and for men and women. Overall, we can see that housework is the most comon activity for women in the morning or afternoon. On the other hand, for men the most common is looking for a job in the morning and watching TV in the afternoon. Housework is most common for unemployment women. In other words, nearly half of women do housework in morning and 21% in the afternoon. 19% of men spend time to do housework in morning compared with only 7% in the afternoon. However, shopping and looking for employ were also more common morning activitys for both men and women with less in the afternoon. In contrast, to visit friends and relative, watching TV and reading were more popular in afternoon. Other activities had smaller percent and did not show as much variation. (Word-count: 158) 1. TASK ACHIEVEMENT: This answer compares the information better. The overview is also clearer. The word count is over 150 and the student used his own words to describe the chart 2. COHERENCE AND COHESION: This answer is generally clear, but sometimes the ideas are not organised logically. 3. LEXICAL RESOURCE: A wider range of words is used in this letter. The words make more sense and are more natural. 4. GRAMMATICAL RANGE AND ACCURACY: A large number of sentences in this answer contain errors. SAMPLE ANSWER: BAND 5 LEVEL The charts show how unemployed people spent their time last year in the United Kingdom. There are fourteen different categouries and percent for men and women in the morning and in afternoon. Lots of men and women unemploy did housework. 19% of men and 49% of women did housework in the morning 7% and 21% in the afternoon. Shopping it’s a popular activitys in the morning time for 20% men and 26% women. In the afternoon 9 % men and 17% women. Also,in the morning job hunting is more popular for men 16% compare with 22% but it’s similar in the afternoon visiting friends and relatives is more popular in the afternoon. Other activitys have smaler numbers and are difference. Staying in bed is more common in morning and doing nothing in the afternoon. The smalest is drinking. It has small numbers for men and women in morning and afternoon. This show no job men and women has no money with 3 men drinking. (Word-count: 151) 1. TASK ACHIEVEMENT: This answer does not have a lot of detail. It also uses short sentences too much and copies too many phrases from the question. There are 151 words, but this student included text which is copied from the question. These words will not be counted. Therefore, the word count is 143. 2. COHERENCE AND COHESION: There are paragraphs in this answer, but the paragraphs do not develop any ideas. It is difficult to read because there are not many linking words or phrases. 3. LEXICAL RESOURCE: The choice of words for this answer is limited. It also has many errors both with word choice and spelling.