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Introduction to Academic Writing THIRD EDITION Alice Oshima Ann Hogue -••• IIIIIIW ••• -
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Contents Preface ................... ................ ........................ ix Acknowledgments ......... ................ ......................... xii PARTl THE PARAGRAPH . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . 1 Chapter 1 Paragraph Format . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . 2 What Is Academic Writing? . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . 3 Organization . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . 3 Paragraph Format . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . 3 Model: Handwritten Assignment Introducing Myse(f . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . 3 Model: Computer-Written Assignment Introducing Myself.. . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . 5 Capitalization . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . 6 Capitalization Rules . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . 7 Sentence Structure . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . I 0 Model: Sentence Structure A Person Who Has Made a Difference: George Lucas . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . I 0 Simple Sentences . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . II Subject-Verb Agreement ........ ............... . ..... . . . ... ... . . ...... ll Fragments . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . 14 The Writing Process . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . 1 5 Overview . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . 15 Step I Prewriting . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . 16 Step 2 Organizing . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . 17 Step 3 Writing . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . 18 Step 4 Polishing: Revising and Editing . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . 18 Review .......... ........ ......... ........ ............................... 21 Writing Assignment . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . 21 Chapter 2 Narrative Paragraphs ......... . ................ 23 Organization . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . 24 Model: Narrative Paragraph Earthquake! .... . ...... . ... . . . ......... . . . .... 24 Time Order ... . . . . . . . .... . . . . . . . ... . . . . ....................... . ...... 24 Time Order Signals .......... . ............... . .......... . ........ 25 Sentence Structure . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . 29 Model: Compound Sentences Omusubi Kororin . . ...... . . . ..... . ...... . ..... 29 Compound Sentences with and, but, so, and or ............. . . . . ....... . .... 30 Coordinating Conjunctions . . ...... . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . ...... . .......... 30 iii
Contents Punctuation . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . 33 Three Comma Rules . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . 33 The Writing Process . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . 34 Freewriting . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . 34 Model: Freewriting A Memorable Event in My Life . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . 34 Review ........... .......... ............................................. 35 Writing Assignment . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . 36 Chapter 3 Paragraph Structure ....... .................... 37 Organization . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . 38 Three Parts of a Paragraph ........ . .......... . ...... ...... . ............. 38 Model: Three Parts of a Paragraph A Hawaiian. Wedding . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . 38 The Topic Sentence . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . 39 Supporting Sentences ...... . .... . ............ . ... . .. . . . . . . . . . ... ...... 44 Examples . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . 45 The Concluding Sentence .... ...... . ............. . . . . ... . . . . . . ....... 47 Punctuation . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . 51 Apostrophes . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . 51 The Writing Process . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . 54 Outlining . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . 54 Model: Detailed Outline Music Styles and Fashion. . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . 55 Review .... . ......... ......................... . ..... . ................. .. 56 Writing Assignment . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . 57 Summary Writing I . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . 57 Chapter 4 Descriptive Paragraphs ......... ............... 60 Organization ............... . . . . ............. ..... ..... . . . . ....... . ...... . 61 Model: Descriptive Paragraph The Stairway . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . 61 Spatial Order . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . 62 Spatial Order Signals . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . 62 Topic Sentences for Descriptive Paragraphs . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . 63 Supporting Sentences for Descriptive Paragraphs . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . 65 Model: Descriptive Details My Banana Garden . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . 65 Paragraph Unity ... . ............. . ............... . ... . ....... . ........ 67 Sentence Structure . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . 68 Model: Compound Sentences Supai Village . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . 68 Compound Sentences with yet,for, and nor .............................. .. 69 Varying �entence Openings . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . 70 The Writing Process . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . 72 Clustering ........... . .................... . .......... . ....... . . . . . . . . 72 Model: Clustering A Place from My Childhood . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . 72 Review ........... . ... . .............. . ............... ................... 73 Skill Sharpeners . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . 74 Writing Assignment ... . .......... ·. . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . 75