Title Y4 Writing 4015b - 2024 Week 17 PPT.pdf ✅

Year 4 Writing 4015b Week 9 Flash backs
Feedback - 4013b What we did well How we could improve Prompt ● Wrote well-developed stories ● Included interesting description and details ● Dialogue was effectively used ● Most children wrote in paragraphs. ● Most people are planning ● Most people are writing at least three paragraphs - remember, fables tend to be short and written in simple language ● Too many people just wrote a variation of a well known fable:”The Tortoise and the Hare”. You need original ideas ● Stories are best written in the past tense - it is easier to be consistent. ● Always plan a resolution ● Some people are still not naming animal characters correctly. Elephant, not the elephant. ● Make sure that the word you use fits the meaning of the sentence ● Check spelling ‘The hardest victory is over the self’
Tom Swifties Let’s play with words
silently angrily speedily slowly always fast exactly fortunately above anxiously safely between foolishly carefully tomorrow never gently eventually absolutely well recently