Content text Copy of [LECTURE NOTE] W7.0 - L7: CONNECT SENTENCES
WRITING MARKING CRITERIA TR Address ALL PARTS of question =>>> Types of essay (Comparing + Listing) Idea development >>> L3+4+5 >>> L6 CC Coherence =>>> Logic idea development >>> L6 Cohesion =>>> Cohesive devices >>> L7 LR Word Pattern Collocation Topic-specific vocabulary >>> L1 GRA Write an error-free sentence >>> L2 W7.0 - L7: CONNECT SENTENCES Model 1 LINKING WORDS A → B. [LW], C Model 2 REFERENCING A → B. B → C Model 3 STRUCTURES A → B, C
LƯU Ý: Luôn cân nhắc đi theo trình tự ưu tiên: IDEA =>>> MODEL =>>> STRUCTURE A → B. [LW], C A → B. B → C A → B, C ↓ ↓ ↓ Expand Cause The reason for this is that ... This is because SV This can derive/ stem from N This can be attributed to N ... because/ since SV ... due to N Regarding the first idea, SV Chief among these is that SV Effect As a result, ... Therefore, ... As a consequence, ... Consequently, ... This + Verb Pattern , which can result in N => possibly resulting in N , which means that SV => meaning that SV , thereby Ving , and thus V idea 1 ↙ ↘ ↑ (+) (-) Introduce ideas ← CONNECT SENTENCES → Develop ideas ↓ Example For example, For instance, ... By way of illustration, ... This can be exemplified by the fact that ... X idea 2 As far the second idea, SV Another point worth mentioning is SV Hypothesis X If (not/no) S1V1, S2V2. Without N, S V. X
[SPECIFIC OUTLINE] [Topic sentence] This trend can produce some negative impacts, in relation to [idea 1] and [idea 2] [Idea 1] Regarding the former, ... [Idea 2] As far as the latter idea is concerned, .... —--- [FRAME] [Topic sentence] This trend can produce some negative impacts. [Idea 1] Chief among these is that ....
MODEL 2: REFERENCING [1] This + Verb Pattern [2] This/ Such/ These NOUN(s) + Verb Pattern → Repetition (+adj) → Synonyms → Change word form (Verb/ Adj =>>> NOUN) → Generalization (This/ Such ... + [category] ) [3] SV1, SV2 ... EXAMPLE REPETITION + Many advertisements use exaggeration techniques. Such techniques may deceive customers and encourage them to purchase products of low quality. + The government decided to tighten the existing policies to deter poaching. These ................ can potentially help save several endangered animals. SYNONYMS + The government should quickly carry out measures to encourage people to leave rural areas. ......... are essential to maintain a sufficient number of agricultural workers. CHANGE WORD FORM + The government should provide schools in rural areas with better facilities and more well-qualified teachers. .................. can significantly improve the quality of teaching in these areas. + Some companies may exaggerate their products via advertisements. .................. may deceive customers and encourage them to purchase products of low quality. + Online shoppers often feel disappointed about their ordered products when they receive them since these items are different from what they expect.