Title 6.0 - Sugar-based drinks.pdf ✅

CAUSES & SOLUTIONS More and more people today are drinking sugar-based drinks. What are the reasons for this? What are the solutions to make people drink less? PARAPHRASING PHRASES: More and more people - An increasing number of people - It is becoming more common for people to... Sugar-based drinks - Beverages containing sugar - Sugary drinks - Soft drinks with sugar - Drinks high in sugar content USE LINEARTHINKING® TO MAKE AN OUTLINE: Specify ▶ What are sugar-based drinks? → Coke, milk tea, energy drinks, etc. Body 1: Causes Body 2: Solutions ▶ [Coke] Soft-drink companies heavily promote their products → people are constantly exposed to such advertisements → be tempted to buy such drinks ▶ [milktea] New flavors are regularly introduced → enhance the appeal of such beverages → attract many young customers ▶ [energy drinks] Deal with an excessive workload/study load → stay up late to finish tasks → turn to energy drinks to keep them alert ▶ [governments] work with health professionals → launch public information campaigns that dissuade the consumption of sugar-based drinks → posters which show the caloric content of popular soft drinks like Coca-Cola and Sprite, along with the recommended level of sugar intake → discourage students from choosing these drinks. ▶ [public health officials] convince consumers to replace them with healthier choices or less-sugar alternatives such as tea or black coffee This document is copyrighted. Redistribution in any way is strictly prohibited. Tài liệu này thuộc quyền sở hữu trí tuệ của DOL English. Mọi hành vi sao chép và phân phối trái phép là vi phạm pháp luật.
→ grow dependent on such drinks ▶ [companies/schools] → reduce the demands of work/studying → give employees/students enough time for proper rest → prevent dependency on energy drinks ✏️ Sample essay The consumption of sugar-containing drinks is on the rise. This can be attributed to several factors, which calls for possible solutions to be adopted. There are various reasons why an increasing number of people are turning to sugar-based beverages. One possible explanation is that because soft-drink companies heavily promote their products, several people can be constantly exposed to these advertisements and therefore be tempted to buy such drinks. For example, companies such as Pepsi have been teaming up with other fast-food chains to promote their beverages, which may lead to more consumers opting for these drinks. Another point worth mentioning is that some people still need to consume sugary beverages like Red Bull and other energy drinks. This is very common among Vietnamese college students, as they need to stay up all night to study when stressful examinations are approaching. Nevertheless, several solutions can be taken to curb the consumption of these beverages. One approach could be for the government to work with health professionals in order to launch public information campaigns that dissuade the consumption of sugar-based drinks. Perhaps one wonderful example is that posters which show the caloric content of popular soft drinks like Coca-Cola and Pepsi, along with the recommended level of sugar intake, can be made to discourage This document is copyrighted. Redistribution in any way is strictly prohibited. Tài liệu này thuộc quyền sở hữu trí tuệ của DOL English. Mọi hành vi sao chép và phân phối trái phép là vi phạm pháp luật.
people from choosing these drinks. Another feasible approach is that public health officials should try to convince consumers to replace drinks high in sugar content with healthier choices or less-sugar alternatives, namely tea or black coffee. These options can allow busy individuals to stay awake without consuming too many energy drinks. In conclusion, I argue that heavy exposure and a need for energy have led to more people consuming sugar-based products; however, steps can be taken to address the issue. (292 words) In Bold = Good Cohesion In Italic = Good Lexis Underlined = Good Grammar Colors = Flows of Idea This document is copyrighted. Redistribution in any way is strictly prohibited. Tài liệu này thuộc quyền sở hữu trí tuệ của DOL English. Mọi hành vi sao chép và phân phối trái phép là vi phạm pháp luật.