Title WRITING TASK 1-MIXED CHARTS-Gender and Age Distribution in Adult Education Courses in 2009 - Giáo viên.pdf ✅

T h ầ y H i ệ p S Đ T : 0 9 0 6 1 1 5 1 7 1 Page 3 of 5 SENTENCE WRITING PRACTICE: Keywords: Bar chart, comparison, enrollment, men, women, evening classes, 2009, pie chart, age distribution, adult learners. __________________________________________________________________________________________________ __________________________________________________________________________________________________ Paraphrased Sentence: The bar chart compares male and female enrollment in 2009's four evening classes, complemented by a pie chart showing these learners' age distribution. Keywords: Evident, bar chart, women, outnumbered, men, evening courses, adult education center. __________________________________________________________________________________________________ __________________________________________________________________________________________________ Paraphrased Sentence: The bar chart clearly shows that in the majority of evening courses at the adult education center, women were significantly more than men. Keywords: Additionally, courses, appeal, older cohorts. __________________________________________________________________________________________________ __________________________________________________________________________________________________ Paraphrased Sentence: Moreover, the courses were more attractive to the older age groups. Keywords: Bar chart, drama, painting, language courses, attracted, women, men, education center, 2009. __________________________________________________________________________________________________ __________________________________________________________________________________________________ Paraphrased Sentence: The bar chart indicates that in 2009, more women than men were drawn to drama, painting, and language courses at the education center. Keywords: Language classes, highest number, participants, 40 female attendees, double, male students. __________________________________________________________________________________________________ __________________________________________________________________________________________________ Paraphrased Sentence: Language classes had the most attendees, with 40 women, twice the number of male students. Keywords: Similar scenario, drama, 20 female students, twice, male counterparts. __________________________________________________________________________________________________ __________________________________________________________________________________________________ Paraphrased Sentence: In drama too, the 20 female students were double the number of male students. Keywords: Painting, favored, both genders, women led, 30 participants, men’s 25. __________________________________________________________________________________________________ __________________________________________________________________________________________________ Paraphrased Sentence: Both men and women preferred painting, but women were ahead with 30 participants compared to 25 men. Keywords: Conversely, sculpture, sole course, greater male presence, 15 attendees. __________________________________________________________________________________________________ __________________________________________________________________________________________________ Paraphrased Sentence: In contrast, sculpture was the only course with more men, though only 15 students in total. Keywords: Examining, age profiles, pie chart, apparent, evening classes, predominantly, older adults. __________________________________________________________________________________________________ __________________________________________________________________________________________________ Paraphrased Sentence: The pie chart’s age profile analysis reveals that older adults mainly chose the evening classes. Keywords: Striking, 42%, students, aged 50 or above, 26%, 40-49 age bracket, appealed, over-40 demographic. __________________________________________________________________________________________________ __________________________________________________________________________________________________
T h ầ y H i ệ p S Đ T : 0 9 0 6 1 1 5 1 7 1 Page 4 of 5 Paraphrased Sentence: Notably, 42% of students were over 50, and 26% were between 40 and 49, showing strong appeal to those over 40. Keywords: Younger adults, less represented, 11%, 20-29 age range, 5%, under 20. __________________________________________________________________________________________________ __________________________________________________________________________________________________ Paraphrased Sentence: Fewer younger adults attended, with 11% aged 20-29 and just 5% under 20. Keywords: Summary, charts, indicate, higher inclination, evening education, older adults, gender disparity, favoring, female participation. __________________________________________________________________________________________________ __________________________________________________________________________________________________ Paraphrased Sentence: To summarize, the charts show older adults' preference for evening education and a clear gender imbalance with more women in most courses. SAMPLE ANSER: The bar chart presents a comparison between the enrollment (1) figures for men and women across four distinct evening classes in 2009, (2) while the pie chart details the age (3) distribution of these adult learners. It is evident from the bar chart that women markedly (4) outnumbered men in most of the evening courses offered at the adult education center. Additionally, the courses showed a greater (5) appeal to the older (6) cohorts. According to the bar chart, drama, painting and language courses all (7) attracted more women than men to the education center in 2009. Language classes had the highest number of (8) participants overall, (9) boasting 40 female (10) attendees, double the number of male students. A similar (11) scenario occurred with respect to drama, with the number of female students, at 20, being twice as many as that of their male (12) counterparts. Painting was also (13) favored by both genders, though women still led with 30 participants to men’s 25. (14) Conversely, sculpture was the (15) sole course with a greater male (16) presence, albeit with a total of just 15 attendees. When examining the age (17) profiles via the pie chart, it becomes apparent that the evening classes were (18) predominantly chosen by older adults. A (19) striking 42% of the students were aged 50 or above, and 26% fell into the 40-49 age (20) bracket, indicating that the courses appealed significantly to the over-40 (21) demographic. Younger adults were less (22) represented, with only 11% in the 20-29 age (23) range, and a (24) mere 5% were under the age of 20. In summary, the charts collectively indicate a higher (25) inclination towards evening education among older adults and a notable gender (26) disparity favoring female (27) participation in most courses. VOCABULARY: 1. enrollment figures, số liệu ghi danh 2. adult learners, người học trưởng thành 3. markedly outnumbered, vượt trội về số lượng 4. adult education center, trung tâm giáo dục người lớn 5. older cohorts, nhóm lớn tuổi 6. attracted more women, thu hút nhiều phụ nữ hơn 7. highest number of participants, số lượng người tham gia cao nhất 8. female attendees, những người tham dự nữ