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DOL English PROBLEMS - SOLUTIONS SAMPLE 1 The internet has transformed the way information is shared and consumed, but it has also created problems that did not exist before. What are the most serious problems associated with this development? What are the possible solutions? Làm rõ information (Thêm Adj hay thêm examples) - Personal information => information leakage - Inaccurate health information => negative effects on health - Too much entertainment information => a source of distraction => cannot focus on important tasks - Political information => cause citizens to display negative attitude towards the authorities Cho Solutions bằng công cụ Who? Who? - The government/The authorities/Public bodies + Introduce stricter laws / Impose a ban on something / introduce punishments on ... + Launch awareness-raising campaigns => educate citizens about the importance of something - Organisations => Specify tuỳ đề => Ra được đối tượng sẽ phải take responsibility + Fake news on social media => Social media companies + Các vấn đề liên quan Students => Schools + The increasing amount of waste due to an increase in the number of consumer products => manufacturers - Individuals => Specify tuỳ đề + Fake news on social media => Users + Children => Parents + The increasing amount of waste due to an increase in the number of consumer products => consumers Problems Idea: this trend → cyber dangers for users Expand: share too much personal information on social media platforms (Facebook, Twitter) → information leakage → increase the risk of being hacked and harassed →
DOL English stress, anxiety and other complicated consequences → lead to a decline in the victims’ quality of life Idea: unverified online sources of health information → contain misleading or wrong knowledge Example: the case of the anti-vaccine movement → cause several parents to decide not to vaccinate their children. Solutions Idea: Internet users → take timely measures to protect their accounts Example: Social media users need to set strong passwords for social media accounts + avoid sharing private information → reinforce the security of their accounts + lower the chance of their private information being stolen Idea: The government and social media companies → join forces to take some actions to reduce cyber threats Example: start by introducing heavy punishments on hackers and Internet fraud + banning websites that are dangerous for people. It is true that the way people find and share information has been transformed by the Internet. This can cause different problems, which calls for possible solutions to be adopted. There are many problems resulting from information being shared online. One obvious issue is that this trend can give rise to certain cyber dangers for users. This is because sharing too much personal information on social media platforms such as Facebook and Twitter can increase the risk of being hacked and harassed. This can result in stress, anxiety and other complicated consequences, and therefore lead to a decline in the victims’ quality of life. Another potential problem is that there are many unverified online sources of health information which contain misleading or wrong knowledge. This can be exemplified by the case of the anti-vaccine movement, which causes several parents to decide not to vaccinate their children. Various measures, nevertheless, can be adopted to tackle the situation. The first possible solution is that Internet users should take timely measures to protect their accounts. For example, social media users need to set strong passwords for social media accounts and avoid sharing private information, which can reinforce the security of their accounts and thus lower the chance of their private information being stolen.
DOL English The second approach is that the government and social media companies should join forces to take some actions to reduce cyber threats. By way of illustration, they can start by introducing heavy punishments on hackers and Internet fraud or banning websites that are dangerous for people. In conclusion, although the fact that data is being shared largely and at a faster pace than before produces some negative impacts, steps can be taken to address the issue. In BOLD = CC Underlined = Grammar Colors = Relationships between ideas SAMPLE 2 Consumers are faced with increasing numbers of advertisements from competing companies. To what extent do you think consumers are influenced by advertisements? What measures can be taken to protect them? Làm rõ adverts sản phẩm nào → cosmetics, clothes on FB, ... Ở đây ta cần lưu ý là chọn những sản phẩm hoặc quảng cáo có thể ảnh hưởng tiêu cực đến người tiêu dùng - Quảng cáo mỹ phẩm: thông thường các quảng cáo trong ngành này thường sử dụng công nghệ chỉnh sửa ảnh để tạo ra hình ảnh hoàn hảo với làn da hoàn mỹ, vóc dáng cân đối, mà không phản ánh đúng với thực tế. Điều này có thể tạo ra một chuẩn mực không thực tế về vẻ đẹp. - Quảng cáo chứa thông tin sai lệch: Một số quảng cáo về thuốc có thể đưa ra những tuyên bố không chính xác về hiệu quả của sản phẩm. Ví dụ, một số quảng cáo có thể quảng cáo thuốc làm giảm cân và hứa hẹn sẽ giảm cân một cách nhanh chóng và dễ dàng mà không cần thay đổi lối sống hay chế độ ăn uống, điều này có thể là không chính xác và gây hiểu lầm cho người tiêu dùng. Cho Solutions bằng công cụ Who? Who? - The government: Áp dụng các biện pháp pháp lý mạnh mẽ đối với các công ty quảng cáo vi phạm luật lệ hoặc cung cấp thông tin không chính xác, đảm bảo rằng các quảng cáo tuân theo các quy định và yêu cầu về sức khỏe và an toàn. - Consumers: người tiêu dùng cần cảnh giác hơn => tạo ra áp lực công cộng để cải thiện và nâng cao chất lượng thông tin được cung cấp.
DOL English Problems: Problem 1: some advertisements → promote unrealistic beauty standards Example: various companies selling cosmetics → hire beautiful models or celebrities to represent their products → cause their audiences (teenagers) to become obsessed with body image and idealism Problem 2: some advertisements on social media platforms → contain misleading information → give customers a false idea about the products. Example: Facebook → be accused of spamming its users with unverified posts advertising products of low quality. Solutions: Solution 1: consumers → need to start taking action to encourage businesses to make changes to their advertising practices Example: they → boycott companies marketing unattainable expectations + start to give preference to those that promote a healthy body image → motivate several companies to change their marketing approaches into more positive ones Solution 2: the government → formulate stricter policy in terms of the authenticity of advertisements Example: the authorities → impose a heavy fine on companies which take advantage of their commercials to make inaccurate statements or create false impressions to sell their products. It is true that rival businesses are producing an ever-increasing quantity of advertisements. This can cause different problems, which calls for possible solutions to be adopted. There are several problems arising from the abundance of advertisements on different media platforms. One issue is that some advertisements tend to promote unrealistic beauty standards. By way of illustration, various companies selling cosmetics often hire beautiful models or celebrities to represent their products, causing their audiences, notably teenagers, to become obsessed with body image and idealism. Another potential problem is that some advertisements on social media platforms contain misleading information that give customers a false idea about the products. For example, Facebook has been accused of spamming its users with unverified posts advertising products of low quality. Several measures, nevertheless, can be put forward to tackle these issues. To begin with, consumers need to start taking action to encourage businesses to make changes